Review #148 Gates of Heaven (02/22/02)
Owner: Jen
Score: 66%
Dream Points: 3/10
"Nightmare? Heavenly? is it borderline? *shrugs* Since the overall opinion is 3... then Nightmare?"

Reviewed by Aurora-hime and Usagirl

Aurora-hime's Review who is also sad, along with Eternal Angel, because Michelle Kwan got the bronze instead of the gold... ::Tear::

The splash page was odd... A Final Fantasy image for a Sailormoon site? You know... this was supposed to be Usagirl's review... but since I have something to say about this site, I thought might as well do this review also. So far, it gave me the wrong impression.

::Clicks to go inside and wonders what the hell I'm getting into::

Well... first off... you update once a week huh? And when was the last time you updated???? DECEMBER... Alrighty then.... And So what if you like other anime and videogames? If it is a "Sailor Moon" site, then your layout HAS TO BE SAILORMOON! Do you know that I've reviewed two sites already that did the same thing? Do you now how funny it looks when here you are, talking about Usagi and the rest and then there's that Rinoa image there? Come on! That is so ridiculous. I can't believe people still do this. Maybe I'll go make an Evangelion layout now for my Boys Be... site... Yup yup... Because I like other anime too... That's such a stupid excuse. You just put Rinoa there because you like the image. If you like other anime other than Sailormoon, then why make a Sailormoon site? ::Gosh... I should stop griping now::

Profiles: ::Oh please, please don't let this be just stats and one little paragraph that mixes both the Japanese and the English version.... Please... Please.. don't let it be....::

Hmmm... what do you know... Just as I expected. First off, I have no idea why these were all targeted to a new window... Can I ask why?.... You know, everytime I see a Sailormoon site like this, it makes me HATE Sailormoon even more. It makes me hate it so much that I cringe everytime someone even mentions that horrific ten letter word.

You are totally mixing Japanese and English. You go from Serena to Sailor Senshi in Serena's profile... When talking about the DUB shouldn't it be Sailor Scouts?....
In "Amy's profile... You spelled her name both Ami and Amy in the same paragraph. I can't believe that. Stick with the DUB damn it. And actually spell "Amy" right. "Ami" and "Amy" are not the same. "Ami" is even pronounced differently. Damn this whole page is messed up. In Amy's profile her Japanese name is Mizuno Ami in "Raye's profile it's Rei Hino... Oh my god! Make up your mind. Shouldn't it be Hino Rei???? You go from Sailor Scouts to Sailor Senshi you have soooooooo many spelling errors... I wonder, how old are you? I'll post the whole paragraph you wrote for Raye here so you can see how bad it really is...

Raye is a priestess who specailizes in fire reading that at times can foretell the future or reveal information about enemies of the sailor scouts. She is stubborn and constantly argues with Serena. On the surface, these arguments make Raye look Serena wrose "friend". However, Raye acully considers Serena to be one of her best friends, and thier arguments are more for fun rather then out of sptie for each other. God, I feel sorry for your English teacher.
In Lita's profile... you wrote this... She is very afraid of airplanes becuase her parents died in one... I thought you said that this is ONLY about the TV Show... I hope you know, that information about her parents is ONLY in the manga. So I wonder... where did you copy this information from? I know you just read it in some site, thought the info was cool and decided to put it in yours, not even realizing that the information didn't happen in the anime. How sad...
Again in Mina's profile, where the heck did you get this information??? Mina has trouble with her Mother and the police because her mother is always scolding her inn the Sailor V Manga she has a love-hate relationship with the police. Mina is the sweet, yet strong one of the group. Her best friend is Serena. She likes to chase after idols and she dreams to be one of herself one day. And the whole paragraph is just bad bad bad. Sailor V manga huh? I wonder if you even read one sentence of that manga to even know such information.

Chibiusa Here is what your wrote... My, I might as well, copy and paste everyone of those paragraphs you wrote for each "scout" so anyone who reads this review will look at your site and shake their heads. Anyway... here is what you wrote... with my comments in CAPITAL LETTERS, obviously... Chibi-Usa fell from the sky one day (In the middle of Momaru<---MOMARU? and Usagi kissing!) and rudely asked Usagi <---ORIGINAL... for the Silver Crystal<---DUB. Usagi<---ORIGINAL assumed her to be rude, mean & selfish (and refused to give her the crystal<---DUB). Chibi-Usa grew to love Momaru<--- THE HELL??? WHO IS MOMARU??? DID HE DECIDE TO FOLLOW CHIBIUSA AND FALL FROM THE SKY TOO? but continued to hate Usagi until, of course, she found out Usagi was Sailormoon as well as her future mother. Chibi Usa<---ANIME is in many ways like Serena<----DUB but, sadly, more mature in the dub.<---WHAT THE HELL? Chibi-Usa gets many attacks too! She becomes a Sailor Senshi <--- WHAT? CHIBIUSA NEVER WAS A SENSHI... SHE'S ONLY IN TRAINING... EVEN IN THE MANGA SHE WASN'T A SENSHI... later on in one of the series.<--- MAYBE THAT LOST SERIES THAT JEN OR WHOEVER IS RUNNING THIS SITE THOUGHT UP???
Michelle weird... .... Michuru considers her actions before going to action. She is very skilled at playing the violin, and she is strong willed and very serious as Sailorneptune. Like Ami, she is thoughtful and always had a plan before taking on an enemy. though she is not as smart as Ami <--- WHAT THE HELL? HOW DO YOU KNOW THAT? DID YOU LOOK AT THEIR TEST SCORES OR SOMETHING??. Like Haruka, she is willing to die for her cause, but she doesnt want to see anyone, especially not Haruka<---SO WHICH IS IT? DOES SHE WANT HARUKA TO GET HURT OR DOES SHE WANT TO PROTECT HER? READ THIS SENTENCE OVER, get hurt.
Haruka's profile... God help me before I decide to kill myself... Amara alter ego is Sailor Uranus. There has been much debate whether this character is male or female <---WHO'S DEBATING THIS? EVERYONE IN THEIR RIGHT MINDS KNOW THAT HARUKA IS A FEMALE! Sailor Uranus is, in fact, a female character who dresses like a male <--NO, REALLY? . Throughout the series and manga, there has been evidence that she harbors feelings for Michiru <--NO, REALLY?, this indicating that she (as well as Michiru) is gay <--NO, REALLY?. Similar to Michiru, Huruka<--WHO THE HELL IS HURUKA? DID SHE FALL FROM THE SKY TOO LIKE CHIBIUSA and MOMARU? attends the prestigious Mugen Gakuen school<---I HOPE YOU KNOW THAT GAKUEN MEANS ACADEMY... SO I GUESS HARUKA GOES TO MUGEN ACADEMY SCHOOL... WOW! I DIDN'T KNOW THERE WAS SUCH A THING. AN ACADEMY and A SCHOOL! WOW! and is famous for her race car driving, as well as her athletic abilities. Sailor Uranus also has a pure heart crystal, which when revealed, forms the Space Sword talisman.
Hotaru...... This whole paragraph seems to be written by someone else. Because well, it actually makes sense. And WOW it uses a couple of BIG words like her nemesis in the social scene ... Nemesis? WOW! I'm impressed. I do hope you know that her classmates are afraid of her because SHE HURTS THEM WITHOUT KNOWING IT not because she has the ability to heal.
I wonder why Chibichibi is even here when this is obviously a DUB site....

Pictures/GIFs/attacks

What the hell??? What was your purpose of doing this???
Seera Muun / Usagi
Seera Murcurii / Ami
Seera Mazzy / Raye
Seera Jupita / Makoto
Seera Venusu / Minako
Seera Chibi Usa / Chibi Usa
Seera Nepchuun / Michiru
Seera Uranusu / Haruka
Seera Puuto/ Setsuna
Seera Saturn / Hotaru
Seera Chibi Chibi Muun / Chibi Chibi
Trying to be different or something? I can't believe you would so such a thing. This is so stupid.

Overall:There is ABSOLUTELY NOTHING IN THIS SITE, except WRONG information, MIXING of the original and the DUB and the manga, NO back links to anything... , AWFUL grammar, AWFUL, I MEAN REAL AWFUL SPELLING! And I'm one of those people who hardly ever comments on spelling! RECYCLED images and gifs, NO credits to Takeuchi-sensei, NO credits to Kondansha/Cloverway/DiC/ blah, blah, blah... A LAYOUT THAT's NOT EVEN SAILORMOON! but guess what it's full of???? UNORIGINALITY. CONGRATS for that! Where the hell is the "REAL" info? What the hell is this site trying to be? This site will be forgotten in 5 seconds and thank God for that. Don't you want to stand out from all the rest out there? FIX EVERYTHING IN THIS SITE! I CAN'T BELIEVE YOU ACTUALLY CALL YOURSELF AN ACTUAL SAILORMOON SITE! I can't believe you are satisfied with your site! Face it, the only reason you think this so called site is great is because you think the layout is all that. Go through this site of yours as a fellow reviewer and as a visitor and I'm pretty sure you'll be embarassed at what you'll see. DAMN! I'm DONE!

Score: 0/50 = 0% Whoa? Really Aurora-hime? Yes, Really. It doesn't even deserve the 5 points we GIVE away @_@
Dreampoints: 0/10

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Usagirl's Review!

First Impression- I like the layout. It is looks nice, but I am surprised that this is a Sailor Moon site. I personally don’t like it. I mean yes you do like other anime but if the site is focused on a certain anime I believe the layout should be of that certain anime. Unless you have a site that includes multiple anime or video games. I mean it might confuse the people who go into your site. Because at first glance I didn’t think this was a Sailor Moon site. Of course that is my opinion.

Profiles: Well. I don’t see why you have the profiles pop up in a different window when it would look fine in frames. You also just have the basic information almost every Sailor Moon site does. There is no difference between your Sailor Moon profiles and others. I would suggest maybe making a bio with your opinions in there or give examples of certain things or find some way to make it stand out. I also like to see a picture with the profile. It can just be with the face but I think it is easier for people who don’t know that much about Sailor Moon associate the information with a face. But again that is what I would do to make it better. I also noticed you have Sailor Mini Moon labeled as Chibi Mini but Sailor Mini Mini Moon you have labeled as Sailor Mini Mini Moon. And since you are going with the American names I would change Chibi to Mini. And since I can’t review your site anymore because it exceeds it limit at the moment I will come back later.

Picture and Gifs: Okay I am back now lets take a look around. I noticed that you have their names in Japanese instead of English unlike the profile page. It might confuse people who do not know or did not look through the files even though it is pretty easy to figure out. I like to see consistency throughout websites. Well considering the vast amounts of Sailor moon and other senshi pictures you don’t have very many. I mean it is easy to find Sailor Moon pictures so you might want to expand on that and the link to Sailor Mars’ pictures doesn’t work. Yahoo keeps saying the url can't be found. Along with Saturn’s under the gifs. Again I think there can be more stuff added to this section and you need to fix the links.

Attacks: Well you do give proper information and it looks good but I would assume it would go under the profile. And you just don’t have the attacks but transformation and that kind of confused me at first. You might want to have the 2 separated Like have attacks then list the attacks then the transformations to make it easier. And you might want to say that transformations are included instead of just attacks. And the links to Sailor Neptune’s page is down also. Yahoo says the url cannot be found again.

Links: I do like how you have the link set up. Giving the site then your opinion about it. I think it is nicely done.

Sisters- This is set up nicely to but if you might want to put up a little bit about each site like you did in the links page. It looks a little strange with some of them having buttons and the others don’t. But that is just my opinion because I almost overlooked the ones with out buttons.

Link us- It is nicely set up and you have a variety of button and banners to choose from. I like it. And you also give credit for the idea to the banner/button or who made them.

RPG- Not reviewed. Side note- I don’t see why people put up the link yet if it isn’t there. I can kind of understand , like in the menu it says RPG *to come* but it annoys me to click on a link and have nothing there.

Sites- No complaints really here. But I noticed that you only linked the text not the button. Usually both are linked and I just noticed that.

Credits- I wish more people would do this. I am kind of a hypocrite because I haven’t done it yet but I am planning to...I am. But I do like it. Especially saying thank to those who have helped you. I like it.

Contact- Not reviewed.

Guest book- I usually don’t say anything about it but I noticed that the images are down.

Overall Impression: There are a couple things you can still improve on. I also would fix some of the broken links and work on expanding more of your site. You might want to consider the points or suggestions I made above. I believe this could be an awesome site if you work a little more at it. And so this gets 33/50. But again this is my opinion plus there is always room to improve.

Score: 33/50 =66%
Dreampoints: 6/10

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